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Hi my name is Izzy Pritchard. I am ten years old I live out Kaniere. I go to Hokitika Primary school.
In my free time, I hang out with my sisters. I love walking tracks, like the West Coast Cycle Trail. I love to go on big bike rides with my family. I love hanging out with friends. I want to be a criminal lawyer when I grow up and go to university; then go to law school in Christchurch.
I love writing about animals and learning new facts about them. I learnt that horses have 205 bones in their skeleton which is a lot. Horses also can run shortly after birth.
My favorite books are the Diary of the Wimpy Kid series they’re very funny. They’re by Jeff Kenny, he is my favorite author. His books make me laugh a lot.
I have learned lots of facts about horses. That I didn’t know and this year I have learned about new thing called jots. This is how they work sometimes we read a story and then we go to our desk and we write down things it reminds us about and they are called jots so when I need to write a story the jots are there to help me out.
I have learnt that I can make lots of mistakes when I write and I can learn from them. Bad pieces of writing can turn into the best pieces of writing and the Writer’s Workshop has taught me how to edit and revise. It has made writing a lot better.
In my free time, I hang out with my sisters. I love walking tracks, like the West Coast Cycle Trail. I love to go on big bike rides with my family. I love hanging out with friends. I want to be a criminal lawyer when I grow up and go to university; then go to law school in Christchurch.
I love writing about animals and learning new facts about them. I learnt that horses have 205 bones in their skeleton which is a lot. Horses also can run shortly after birth.
My favorite books are the Diary of the Wimpy Kid series they’re very funny. They’re by Jeff Kenny, he is my favorite author. His books make me laugh a lot.
I have learned lots of facts about horses. That I didn’t know and this year I have learned about new thing called jots. This is how they work sometimes we read a story and then we go to our desk and we write down things it reminds us about and they are called jots so when I need to write a story the jots are there to help me out.
I have learnt that I can make lots of mistakes when I write and I can learn from them. Bad pieces of writing can turn into the best pieces of writing and the Writer’s Workshop has taught me how to edit and revise. It has made writing a lot better.
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