Kia ora and welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Hokitika School in Hokitika, New Zealand.
I used these word because this is what it was like for him hard days work then he would eat his oats and go to sleep then the war took him and he had a hard life then it was a happy ending.
Hi my name is Eddy,That is a cool poem But you might want to check the formatting as it stretch's over the page but other than that is is great
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I used these word because this is what it was like for him hard days work then he would eat his oats and go to sleep then the war took him and he had a hard life then it was a happy ending.
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